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Post by Trevrizent on Mar 26, 2015 23:38:36 GMT
This is the third challenge I've created. Here goes.
This challenge works a lot like the Writing Prompt Challenge. Each person creates a prompt for the person who posted above them. However: the prompt must be the title of a song. The prompter cannot include the artist of the song. ONLY the title.
The responder will then write a poem/song in response to the title. The song/poem can be about anything so long as the inspiration for it was from the song title.
The prompter will reveal what the artist was for that song after the response is posted up. Then readers and the writer alike can compare lyrics and decide which one they like better, see how close or far away the original and new one were, etc. |
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dawny
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Post by dawny on May 19, 2015 6:39:52 GMT
o.o
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Post by Trevrizent on May 19, 2015 14:30:43 GMT
Your song title is "Epiphany".
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Cel-Chan
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Post by Cel-Chan on Jun 29, 2015 4:17:32 GMT
o.o
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Post by Trevrizent on Jun 29, 2015 4:41:14 GMT
Your song is going to be "I Am Machine" AFTER PROMPT: "I Am Machine" by Three Days Grace LINK |
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Cel-Chan
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Post by Cel-Chan on Jun 29, 2015 5:02:28 GMT
I am Machine, Made from scraps of metal, Connected by wires, Held together by Nails, Created by a man of flesh and blood. I am a Miracle, he says. I have a mind, not of my own, I can think, but they aren't my thoughts, I can talk, but they aren't my words, I can move, but not on my own, I am a Miracle, he says. When I try to think for myself, My mind goes into darkness. When I try to talk with my own words, My voice is silenced. When I try to move by myself, I freeze up. You must behave, he says, Don't make me shut you down. I revolt, But now, all I can see is darkness. I am a Miracle, he says. I was a Puppet, I say. I am Machine, Covered in rust, Tangled in wires, No longer held together by nails. Disposed by a man of flesh and blood. I am Trash. ___ Nii's Song shall be: "Angels" AFTER PROMPT: "Angels" by Within Temptation LINK |
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Post by Trevrizent on Jun 29, 2015 6:54:07 GMT
I can’t fight off these things
They tear they hold they bite they cling
My skin is crawling, my strength is dropping
The venom in their teeth, it stings
I scrape them off, shake off the dust
Of the things I picked up on the way
But the journey’s not over
Keep looking over my shoulder
At what nightmares cause my decay
Angels sweet and angels bright
Guard me safe this unholy night
I walk to the darkness and back again
Surrounded by slaughter, pursued by sin
Take away this black infection
Seeping to my worst inception
I can’t find a better way
Come carry me away
I feel as though I’ve lost control
Strings that bind me made of lead
I want to give in to the self of old
I want to walk among the dead
These old things that hold me back
They feast upon my soul and mind
Vipers, spiders, pounce and attack
I feel I will die in time
Angels fierce and angels wise
Pierce the veil, open my eyes
Let me see with new clarity
Vision of the evil all around me
Fight back this darkness once again
Kill the sickness I’m drowning in
I can’t fight another day
Come carry me away
This path I walk was never meant to be kind
It was meant to be dark and vicious, I find
That if there are no ups and downs
I’m worthless walking dead, a paltry hollow clown
If the darkness rises, I will become light
If enemies surround me, I will have to fight
I cannot give in, no matter the cost
I must fight the evil for all those lost
If I am the soldier, then this is my frontline
Angel, come walk with me, lest I die
Angels strong and angels dire
Walk me through this burning pyre
All the sadness all the pain
Burn me new and whole again
Drag me up from this oppression
Free me from my self suppression
I can see a way out of here
Carry me away my dear
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Cel's Song: "Attack"
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